Ah, November, that special time of year when the smell of pumpkin spice mixes with the smell of cinnamon pine cones and the radio starts playing Christmas music and the brisk air turns brisker (except in Arizona, where the hot summer air turns into perfect fall air, but I digress). Maybe it is because my birthday falls in this month, and maybe it is the magic of Thanksgiving,
For the uninitiated, NaNoWriMo stands for National Novel Writing Month. During this month, novelists and aspiring novelists around the globe struggle to write a 50,000-word novel in just 30 days.
Those of you who do long-division in your head have already figured out that, to achieve this goal, you must write an average of 1,667 words per day. For some, that may sound easy. For everyone else, that is a huge challenge.
You might be wondering why anyone would afflict this on themselves. I think everyone does it for a different reason. Many have wanted to write a book their entire lives and are finally committing to it. Others just want to have some fun. Still others just want to be able to say they did it. Whatever the reason, I think they are good ones.
The book I just created was a NaNo attempt, though it turned out to be 90,000+ words long and took 2 months to complete. Still, I don't think I would have gotten that far without NaNoWriMo helping me focus. I'm using this year to write book 2!
So, while many of you may be getting nostalgic and anxious for the coming holidays or just the cooler weather, I'll be holed up, hammering away at a keyboard putting words to paper.
It is, after all, a magical time of year.
You can track my NaNoWriMo2017 progress on Twitter or on my NaNo profile page.
I suppose it's only human to want only bad people to die horrible, painful deaths--especially if they are children. I guess that allows us to say "they had it coming." If, in our stories, decent, average people meet terrible, gruesome ends, it probably strikes too close to home. The problem is that it also diminishes the horror of an otherwise spectacular book.
Last week, I wrote about what I call The Psychopath Syndrome, the trend for horror writers to turn all their characters into despicable, unlikable people. I argued that it takes away from the story, because most of us know very few psychopaths and can't relate to them. This book is an excellent example of that syndrome.
First, the good stuff.
The Troop is a creepy, creepy story. The conveniently-named Nick Cutter does an amazing job building tension and creating a sleep-with-the-lights-on-story. The monster is skin-crawlingly good and other writers should use this book as a case study in how to turn mundane things into objects of horror. The peril and danger mount throughout and you really do question who--if anyone--will survive.
But the characters are a problem.
The book is about a small Boy Scout Troop camping on an island off the coast of Prince Edward Island in Canada (yes, the land of Anne of Green Gables). Through a series of events, they are exposed to a what amounts to a horrifying biological weapon that eats human beings from the inside out. Chaos ensues and soon the Scoutmaster and his boys are all turning on each other making things even worse. It soon devolves into a Lord of the Flies scenario, but with a real monster picking the kids off one at a time.
The problem is that none of the characters are likable. Period.
The Scoutmaster is a bit wishy-washy, one of the boys is a sociopath, another has serious anger-management issues, another is a weakling, and another is a full-on serial-killer-in-the-making. There is only one boy--ONE!--that I would classify as a somewhat normal human being, but he fails the likable test by the simple fact that he just isn't on the page that often for most of the book (the weakling/nerd also turns out to be decent, but starts as a doormat). The end result is that I couldn't bring myself to care about them, which significantly diminished the scare factor.
In the end, I did enjoy the book. A lot of it is incredibly well-done, and I will keep an eye out for more of Cutter's work in the future. I just hope he discovers that not all characters are horrible human beings.
There is a trend in most modern horror that turns me off faster than pretty much anything else. I say “most” because there are exceptions, but it is common enough to bother me. More than that, I think it is becoming more prevalent and that it has even started showing up in other genres.
I call it “The Psychopath Syndrome.”
Let me explain with an example.
I am currently reading The Troop by Nick Cutter. Besides having the perfect horror writer name, Cutter has also crafted an incredibly creepy story. The monster is terrifying, and Cutter’s writing is a study in how to make mundane things frightening, but he falls into a trap that destroys, or at least significantly damages, the story’s believability: All his characters are psychopaths.
To see why this is a problem, you have to understand that The Troop is about a Boy Scout troop that gets isolated on an island off the eastern coast of Canada when what amounts to a biological weapon is released on the island. I know what you’re thinking: “Aren’t all Boy Scouts psychopaths?”
No. No they aren’t.
I spent a lot of time with the Boy Scouts growing up, and even still have regular contact with them. I admit that there is definitely a “Boy Scout Effect” that seems to neutralize the parts of their brains that keep them from doing stupid things, and I will also admit that there is the rare bully, but that’s not the same thing.
In Cutter’s Troop, one boy is a sociopathic bully who mercilessly locks up the Scoutmaster when he gets infected and treats everyone else like a punching bag, another boy has significant anger management issues, another is suffering from an identity crisis, and another is a full-on serial killer-in-the-making. Only one boy is what I would define as relatively normal (though the boy suffering an identity crisis will be familiar to the social outcasts of the world).
See the problem?
I'm not saying boys like these do not exist, but in a single troop? That stretches believability to the breaking point.
I'm not saying boys like these do not exist, but in a single troop?
And that’s the problem. In modern horror (and spreading to other genres), everyone is a psychopath or suffering from extreme neurological disorders. And while I understand that the world of fiction is often meant to be a magnification of reality, the idea that decent, average people are in the vast minority of the population can often ruin a story for me. It’s why I don’t like reading Stephen King.
I am also currently reading a book about writing: Blake Snyder’s seminal Save the Cat! I will discuss Snyder’s work in more detail later, but for now, I want to focus on one concept: the idea of saving the cat.
For Snyder, it’s important that main characters be, at least to some degree, likable or relatable. Think of Ripley in Alien. Even though the ship is alien-infested and the self-destruct counter is ticking down, she goes back to save the cat (I’m not certain if this is where the phrase comes from, Snyder has yet to explain in the book). It is a moment, almost more than any other, that defines her as a hero (Aliens, the sequel, ups the ante by sending her back for a child). Snyder argues that every story needs a moment like that so that the readers can root for the characters.
I don’t know that a “save the cat” moment is necessary in fiction. I think a legitimate argument can be made to omit it, and I can certainly see a case for compelling, despicable characters (I’m looking at you Gillian Flynn), but I also think they should be in the minority, because the truth is: most people are pretty decent, and watching decent people struggle against impossible odds makes for a better story.
Watching decent people struggle against impossible odds makes for a better story.
Seriously, how many outright, evil villains have you met or known in your life? How many actual (not figurative or pseudo) psychopaths do you associate with on a regular basis?
Sure, your boss may be a jerk, and that guy who cut you off in traffic is darned lucky you don’t have a button that will vaporize the car in front of you, but are they really evil? Are they really psychopaths?
Again, I’m not saying those don’t exist, what I’m saying is that they aren’t the norm.
I’m also not saying all humans are wonder, kind-hearted, generous people. Humans today are just what they’ve always been: a flawed mix of good and bad, capable of great destruction and hate and incredible creativity and compassion. They are complex and difficult, they make mistakes and are capable of inflicting terrible pain, but few are outright deviant or psychotic. In fact, most are trying to do the best they can with what they have.
When we give into the Psychopath Syndrome, when we write nothing but terrible people into our stories–even horror stories where characters are little more than monster chow–we cheapen them and we add to the darkness of a world already cast too much in shadow.
When we give into the Psychopath Syndrome, when we write nothing but terrible people into our stories, ... we cheapen them.
The solution is not to write characters that are so unbelievably good–so Pollyanna-ish–that they will be too sweet for even the darkest creature’s palette. The solution is write believable characters, complex characters that approximate reality. Give readers someone they recognize, someone they associate with on a regular basis, and they drive them hell and see how they come out on the other side. Your writing will be better for it.
I love reading Tad Williams.
I hate reading Tad Williams.
I love reading Tad Williams. His prose flows like no other. His words come together in a way that makes them almost disappear into the image of the world.
I hate reading Tad Williams. It is SO LOOOOOOOOOONG! Exciting moments like the escape from the castle or the discovery of a burned out monastery are separated by hundreds of pages of eyeball-bleeding stretches of nothing.
I love reading Tad Williams. His world and creatures are some of the best-written in all of epic fantasy or fiction in general. The politics, the cultures, the climate, everything in Osten Ard are amazingly well drawn and believable.
I hate reading Tad Williams. I want to strangle most of his main characters, or they bore me. Simon, the main character, spends a good half the book whining and most of the rest wandering lost with too little actually happening. He gets about five pages of redemption, but it’s too little, too late for me to care about him. The aristocracy goes through incredibly long debates and acts like children for far too long before they do anything interesting.
I loved reading The Dragonbone Chair.
I couldn’t wait for to over.
I have to find out what happens next.
I need a break first.
Over the last two weekends, I attended 2 separate writing conferences: the Rocky Mountain Fiction Writers Colorado Gold conference in Denver, and the Arizona Night Writers Association conference in Gilbert, Arizona. I met awesome people at both, and also saw some really amazing panels and workshops. Over the next couple of weeks, I plan to share some of the things that I learned. Today, I am sharing my notes of the most useful presentations at the RMFW conference about editing.
The presentation, called "Coal to Diamonds: How to Edit Your Manuscript From First Draft to Final Polish," was given by bestselling ninja mystery author, Susan Spann (who also gave me invaluable advice about pitching my own novel!). In the presentation, she explained her writing/editing process in detail. That process, she explains, involves 7 individual drafts (she defines a draft a a full edit from beginning to end). Let's break them down one-by-one
1st: Word Vomit
Susan writes her first draft as word vomit. There is no filter. Everything goes on the page as quickly as possible. The goal is to get the story in some form onto the page. It will be rough, it may lack important details, but it is written down. It has a beginning, a middle, and an end.
Three things are important for this draft:
1. No editing. Just write. Get it out.
2. Set a word limit that you will reach per day and stick to it. Susan's limit is 6,000 words (she writes her first draft in 10 days!). Most writers can't handle that, so she advises to pick a limit and stick to it until you've mastered it and then up it. She started with a limit of 250 words and built up.
3. If you get stuck, think of the most improbably thing that can happen in your world and shoot for it. Try killing off a main character (or almost doing so) or something along those lines. This will help spark your creativity, and you can get through it.
2nd: The Skeleton
3rd: Research and Detail
When Susan has questions that require research or discovers places that need more detail during the 1st and 2nd drafts, she notes them in her manuscript and moves on. Now is the time to go back, do the research, and add that detail.
Another focus of the 3rd draft is to bring in the emotional impact of the story. This is often found in the details in how characters move and speak. Dialogue and mannerisms start to become very important here.
4th: Chapters and Trim
5th: Annoy the Family
Susan reads her 5th draft out loud. When she finds a place that causes her to stumble, she fixes it. This is one of the best ways to ensure that the words flow.
The goal for this draft is to add your unique voice to your story. It is also to check for grammar, sentence structure, and echo words.
The book finally goes out for critiques. Most other writers would consider this the alpha and beta reader stage. I'm not certain whether Susan takes partial work to a critique group, but it didn't sound like it from her presentation. In her words, this is when the story is finally read by others.
Most authors find this stage very difficult. Susan's advice is to remember that there is nothing your critique partners can say that will be as mean as someone on Amazon. In other words, as a writer, you need to learn to take it.
There is nothing your critique partners can say that is as mean as someone on Amazon.
Once the critiques come back, Susan goes through them and incorporates comments she believes are useful into the book. While she doesn't use everything, she does think about each comment and asks herself what made the commenter say it.
7th: Spit and Polish
The final draft, a last pass through the story for spit and polish, and then it is off to the agent.
Writing is very personal. Every author must find their own process and their own voice. However, learning the processes that work for others can be very instructive. I was surprised to discover that my own process is similar to Susan's, but I learned some new things that I will try as well.
What is your process?
My head was pounding. My heart was thudding. My hands were sweating. My throat was dry. And that was just for the pitch coaching session.
Last week, I gave my first, honest-to-goodness author pitch to an agent. It was one of the most terrifying, anxiety-inducing experiences of my life. Two weeks earlier, I had no idea what a pitch WAS, much less how to write and deliver one. What I found online was contradictory, and in spite of the assurances of my critique group, I felt woefully unprepared.
Spoiler, the pitch went well. I didn't keel over dead, and the agent asked to read my manuscript. Woo!
Along the way, I learned a few things that I think will help other writers looking to pitch.
First: Your pitch needs to be short.
Everything I found online suggested that a pitch should be a couple of paragraphs. So that was what I prepared. I took it to my pitch coach the day before my pitch and she scrapped the whole thing.
"It's too much detail," she said.
She had me tell her about my story and wrote down details. Afterwards, she constructed a single sentence:
"A group of engineers in the Arizona desert loses contact with the outside world, only to discover that they are being hunted by a creature of animated stone who feeds on the blood of the living."
It was simple, straightforward, and incredibly accurate. It also highlighted the primary conflict (overcoming the creature) and the main characters (the engineering group). Even better, it focused on what makes my story different (a creature of animated stone). It was also easy to remember (a HUGE plus).
When I repeated this line to the agent, her eyebrows went up, she wrote some notes and asked for more.
Second: Be ready for a conversation.
After rewriting my pitch, my pitch coach (the awesome author Susan Spann) walked me through a conversation about my book. She helped me identify the key points I want to raise: where the creature comes from, why the engineering team is in the desert, what books/movies/TV shows are comparable to my book.
While not every one of these questions came up in the actual pitch session, some did. It also made me think about short, to-the-point summary sentences that helped me pitch better.
Third: Practice, practice, practice.
The night between my coaching session and my pitch, I practiced. A LOT. The morning of my pitch found me making laps through the conference hotel halls repeating my pitch line and reenacting potential conversations in my mind.
Another conference attendee saw this, recognized what I was doing, and stopped me to talk. She asked me for my pitch and engaged me in a conversation. It was awesome, because it helped me see that the pitch worked OK for others. I don't remember her name, but I am very grateful for her help.
Finally: Just do it
In the end, you just need to do it. The very next week, I found myself at another conference. I had a chance to talk to other writers and agents. I used the pitch. The result was some awesome conversations. More important, I will be better prepared the next time.
I'll probably still be terrified.
Sixteen years and one week ago, I was walking across a parking lot when a plane flew overhead. I froze. My heart beat faster, and a chill went through me as I turned to watch the very normal 747 make it's way toward the airport. I watched until it had completely disappeared from view.
It was the first plane I'd seen since 9/11.
The terrorist attacks on September 11, 2001, were horrific and all-but indescribable. For weeks afterwards, I walked around in a haze, a hollow pit in my stomach. I subscribe whole-heartedly to William Faulkner's declaration in his Nobel Prize acceptance speech: "I believe that man will not merely endure: he will prevail." I tend to see the best intentions, even if I don't agree with the actions (even for politicians). So 9/11 shook me to the core. I couldn't believe that humans could be so violent and filled with hate. It was, in short, an eye-opening, life-changing event.
The shadow of 9/11 would haunt me for years. Later, it would become the focus of my research as I looked at how it impacted our world through the lens of superheroes, which I published in my first (and only) non-fiction book: The Superhero Response. In that research, I learned a lot about heroes and a lot about villains. Because of that, I remain more convinced of the goodness of men and women than ever before.
The night of 9/11, President George W. Bush said: "Today, our nation saw evil -- the very worst of human nature -- and we responded with the best of America." In so many ways, that was true, though it extended well beyond America's borders and culture. Over the last sixteen years, it has felt like our world is under siege from man-made threats, to natural disasters, to political upheaval, to cultural wars. It feels like the world is so much darker than it was even twenty or thirty years ago. This feeling of darkness resulted in a large number of people hoping to "Make America Great Again" and caused many others to rise up stronger than ever against perceived oppression. I am convinced that Charlottesville and other moments like it are the inevitable result of this growing perception of darkness.
But darkness cannot exist without light, and the darker things are, the brighter the light shines.
Even as our world seems to grow darker, we have seen heroes rise up to stand against it. For every evil or terrible moment, there are countless deeds of heroism and kindness that counteract it. Hurricane Harvey was devastating, but led to an outpouring of support. Charlottesville brought thousands into the streets to protest racism and white nationalism. And on and on and on.
Sixteen years ago, watching that plane fly across the sky, a sinking feeling in the pit of my stomach, I didn't know if I could ever restore my faith in humanity. Now it is stronger than ever.
Today, as we remember that awful morning that revealed so much evil to the world, let us also remember, that we are stronger than the darkness and better than we believe.
A few years ago, my very astute children coined the term: "Nervicited." It describes the state you are in when you are both very nervous and very excited about something. It also describes exactly how I've felt all week.
Late tomorrow, I'm off to Denver to attend the Rocky Mountain Fiction Writers Colorado Gold Conference (#RMFW2017) for the rest of the week. This will be my very first writers conference and I'm very, very excited to meet all the awesome people I'm certain will be there and to spend 3 days focusing on nothing but writing. While I'm there, I will be participating in a critique group with a real agent, pitching my book to another agent, and reading the first chapter to a ballroom full of strangers.
I. Am. Terrified.
I don't know if non-artists fully appreciate how difficult it is for artists to share their work with others who might criticize it. My writing is a part of me. If you don't like it, that can feel very personal, even if it isn't.
I know. I know. What's the worse that can happen? Probably nothing. I'm going to have a cool experience no matter what, but knowing that hasn't reduced my anxiety even a little bit.
Maybe I'm just overly dramatic.
Maybe I'm just nervicited.
Wish me luck!
It's fun to tell people you've written a 100,000 word novel. Their eyes grow huge and they stare at you like you are some kind of freak of nature.
"I could NEVER write that much," they say with an expression of awe usually reserved for rock stars or Deity. We can discuss my opinions of THAT statement another day, but in a way they are right: Stringing together 100K+ words into a coherent plot is a challenge, not to mention the difficulty of actually making said 100K+ words good. But even that is nothing compared to trying to write a pitch.
For those of you not in the know, a pitch is a 1-2 paragraph description of your book designed to hook an editor or agent. I will be pitching my book to an actual agent at the Rocky Mountain Fiction Writers Colorado Gold Conference next week (I'm very nervous), and so I've spent many hours over the past few weeks writing my pitch.
It is so hard!
How am I supposed to distill 350 pages of sweat and tears and ups and downs and life and death into a couple hundred words? And then, to top it all off, YOU AREN'T SUPPOSED TO MEMORIZE IT!
I suppose it wouldn't be so bad if it didn't feel like so many of my hopes and dreams are tied up in these 2 paragraphs. This feels like make-or-break time. Do or die. Fish or cut bait. Paper or plastic!
Okay. Maybe that's a bit much, but it is still amazingly hard.
Incidentally, I'd love to share my pitch with you, but I can't. An unfortunate reality is that, by its nature, it has to spoil the ending. So you'll just have to wait to read the book.
The last couple of weeks, I have been working on incorporating beta reader feedback into my book. It has been an amazing experience.
For those of you not in the know, beta readers are readers who get to read a manuscript before it is pitched to an agent or publishing house. They provide feedback to the author on what they liked, what they disliked, and any suggestions on improving it.
Handing your manuscript off to beta readers can be nerve wracking. Imagine handing off one of your children to someone else and asking them to tell you everything wrong with that child. Beta reading kind of feels like that. At the same time, it can be awesome.
If they like your book, you get some awesome praise. Authors love praise. Some of the praise I received included:
I really like the "monster". I read quite a bit of horror and this was unlike anything I've ever read. Really unique and creepy as hell!
Or how about my wife's comment after finishing the book for the first time:
Well, that was horrifying.
And one of my favorites:
This was one of the best horror books I have read and I would definitely recommend others to read it.
And then there is the ultimate compliment for any writer:
Yes, I would definitely read the next book in the series (and the next, and the next) and I would recommend it to everyone I know.
And then there's the part where they make your story better. My beta readers found a couple of small plot holes. Filling them has really improved the story, even if they weren't gaping craters.
So, even if they can be absolutely terrifying, they can also be one of the best parts of writing.